Just a little opening for a story idea I'm toying with. Let me know what you think!
---As the sun was setting, Sam peered ahead on the bike path,
seeing his silhouette dimly traced on the pavement. He was thirsty, parched
from a day of riding. It had been a while, and he cursed himself because of it.
“I want to get back in shape, I miss riding the trails like I used to,” he’d
told himself at the start of the summer, but he was really regretting letting
himself go this long.
His chest was burning, as were his legs, and with home just
a few minutes away, Sam decided to push his bike the rest of the way. “I really
shouldn’t be biking at night without my safety lights on, anyway,” he thought
to himself as he strolled along, watching his own shadow cross over those of
tree branches that blew wildly in the summer breeze.
The light was just about gone, and what was left of his
shadow that the trees hadn’t snuffed out was almost completely faded, absorbed
into the darkness that fell over the path like a blanket. It was just then that
he’d realized the reason he was having such a comfortable time pushing his bike
on the usually busy path; he was alone. In fact, he hadn’t seen anyone in quite
some time.
It wasn’t something new to him, really. He’d only actually
gone biking with a friend a handful of times. Sam came to find that people were
unreliable, and if he was really going to get back in shape, he couldn’t count
on someone else to push him. But there were always people on the path, at any
given time. It wasn’t ever this empty, though—or, this dark, that he could
remember.
The breeze continued to blow through the leaves and
branches, but Sam couldn’t quite shake the feeling that he was hearing
something else along with it. Something quiet, sneaky. He slowed, almost to a
stop, so that he could hear it more clearly. Sam turned his head, looking out
into the blackness of the woods beside the path, held his breath, and listened.
He heard it for sure this time. With his head locked straight-ahead, he
quickened his pace.
It was getting louder now, closer, as if it was following
behind him. Sam was moving at a brisk pace now, along side his bike. Half
tempted to turn around to view where it
was coming from, half tempted to ditch his bike and move to an all out sprint,
Sam couldn’t decide before he noticed something moving in the darkness in front
of him—shadows, moving in the darkness, somehow darker than the night, whipping
furiously across the only path he had. He chose the latter option.
Sam’s bike hit the pavement with a crash, and he bolt as
fast as he could—but he couldn’t see towards what. For the first time since he
heard them, after believing he’d been running toward the exit, Sam realized the
he could no longer see the way out. There was no light at the end, there was
only the barely visible path, and whoever—whatever—was
behind him.
“I’ll just run. I’ll stay on the path, and I’ll run,” Sam
said. The wind blew, and he heard it again. “Shut up! I’m not tired!” he shouted, as he strained to maintain the
pace. It was quicker than he was, though. This was all a game.
He closed his eyes, but he couldn’t shut out the whispers
that came from the deep, hollow woods. They were right. He was tired, fat, out
of shape. He’d kill to be sitting at home on the couch, drinking a beer. Just
the thought made him want to slow down. What was he running for? He opened his
eyes again, and saw a light. He knew the light; it was the streetlight that
stood where the bike path met the road. He felt safe again. Safe, until he
heard those nasty little whispering voices laughing.
As he approached the light, he was stopped dead. He saw,
under the old streetlight, his bike, the bike that he’d ditched heaven only
knows how far back. He couldn’t shake the empty feeling the whole scene gave
him; his bike lying beneath the dull, soulless light. Just then, a figure
caught his eye, something just outside the reaches of that light. He heard that
something moving through the brush just off the path.
He slowly crept up to the light, examining what was indeed
his bike. Every instinct told him not to, but his eyes were drawn to it like a
magnet. Sam couldn’t stop himself from looking to the edge of the path, where
he saw that mysterious figure. It looked like something had slid from the path,
or was dragged out into the woods. There was dirt kicked up, little plants and
shrubbery trampled and destroyed, and in the middle of it, was a shoe.
Sam could barely make it out in the darkness, but the shoe
was familiar. He’d had a pair like that
before, Nike brand running shoe. “In fact…” he thought, as he looked down. He
had the matching shoe on his left foot, and was missing the right. A man
possessed, by curiosity or something else, Sam followed the trail half wanting
to know what he’d find, half already knowing the answer.
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